domingo, 11 de marzo de 2012

"The Poetic Interpretation of the Twist" and "The Empty Shoes" March 12, 2012 - March 14, 2012

"The Poetic Interpretation of the Twist" and "The Empty Shoes," Eady reflects on the ways in which nonhuman objects can communicate just as human do. Discuss how the twist and a pair of empty dance shoes communicate ideas, message, or memories. Does this type of communication serve as positive purpose? Why or why not? Support your response with examples from both poems.

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  1. The twist communicates memories. The empty dance shoes communicates memories. Yes. Because in the empty dance shoes Eady compares the empty dance shoes to a clown that is lying on the floor because he got beat up with a sandbag. In life when you are beat up on the ground always get up and carry on. And in the twist that you may not remember things but that doesn't mean that you have no knowledge.

    Neida M. Rodriguez, 10 SABAOT

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  2. The twist communicates memories and the empty dance shoes too. Yes it does because, Esady compares the shoes to a clown on the floor that got beat up and, when in life we are down we need to get up and continue. And in the twist doesn't matter if you don't remember things you have knowledge that don't say you don't have it.
    Sebastian j. Gonzalez, 10 Jireh

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  3. In the twist it talks about memories and relates empty dance shoes with it. Yes,it brings a positive thought to the reader.In the "empty dance shoes" Eady compares the empty dance shoes with a clown who is lying on the floor, because he got beat up with a sandbag.When we fail and fall for some reason in life we must get back up an remember to stay strong. Also, in "the twist" if we don't remender something of our past doesn't mean we have no knowledge about it.

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  4. Both stories comunicate memories. This serves as a positive purpose because, for example, in t "Empty Dance Shoes" Eady compares the shoes with a clown who got beat up and cannot get up. This tells us that we shouldn't give up no matter how many times we're put down. Also, in the "Twist" he tells us that even though you don't remember something it doesn't mean you don't have any knowledge of it.
    Lloyd, 10 Jireh.

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  5. The empty shoes and the tuist comunicates the memories.This serves a positive purpose. Example: in empty shoes Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up and couldn't get up. This teacho us that we need to fight for what we want and don't give up. The Twist tells us that even when we don't remember about something that doesn't means that you are dum or that you don't have the knowledge to do it.
    ROLANDO RODRIGUEZ AYBAR
    10ADONAI

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  6. Both poems communicate memories. In "The empty shoes" Eady compares the shoes with a clown knocked down by a sandbag; it serves as a positive purpose to us because we should never give-up when times get harder or difficult, we should always stand up and face those times. Also, the poem "The twist" serves as a positive purpose to us because Eady reflects that even though you can’t remember something that occur one time it doesn’t mean you don’t have the knowledge or understanding of it.
    Andrea Rodriguez 10 sabaot

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  7. The twist communicates memories and the empty dance shoes too.Yes,because, Esady compares the shoes to a clown on the floor that got beat up and, when in life we are down we need to get up and continue and forget about it. And in the twist doesn't matter if you don't remember things you have knowledge that don't say you don't have it.

    -Mariel Elisa
    10 SABAOT

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  8. The 2 compare memories.In "The empty dancing shoes" Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got hit by a sandbag.This works as a positive purpose 'cause it tells us to keep trying.In "The Twist" he tells the reader that if you forgot something the knowledge isn't erased. Daniel J. Colón López 10mo Jireh

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  9. The twist and the empty dancing shoes both communicate memories Eady compares the shoe to a clown that got beat up , he tells this to motivate us to get back up when we are down.In the twist it doesnt matter if we dont remember u have a kniwledge that doesnt say you dont have it.

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  10. In both poems "The twist" and "The empty dancing shores" they communicate memories. In the first poem "The empy shoes"Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got hit by a sandbag. This poem gives us a positive purpose because it tell us that we should never give up and we should keep trying because as they say:"if you fall 100 times you should get up 101". In the poem "The twist"it also give us a positive purpose because it tell us that even if you don't remember something that occur one time it doesn’t mean you don’t have the knowledge :)
    Fabiola Garcia Adorno<3 (;

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  11. Both poems compares memories. The empty dancing shoes, in this poem Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up, it is a positive purpose because this motivate the people to never give up when the situation is very hard. The twist he try to communicate us that if you don't remember something that don't mean that you don't have knowledge of it.

    HAMED YAMIL 10Jireh

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  12. In "The twist" and " The empty dance shoes both communicate memories. In "The empty dance shoes" Eady compares the empty dance shoes to a clown that is on the floor because he got beat up with a sandbag. In life when you are beat up on the ground always get up and keep fighting. And in "The twist" that you may not remember things but that doesn't mean that you have no inteligence.

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  13. The 2 poems communicate the memories of empty shoes compared eady clown shoes with a hit. and the other poem The twist serves as a positive purpose for us because it reflects but can not remember something that happens once does not mean you can not understand that.
    Edwin l torres
    10-sabaot

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  14. Both poems, "The empty dance shoes" and "The Twist" communicate memories. This type of communication serve as a positive purpose because, in "The empty dance shoes", Eady compares the shoes to a clown that get beat up, this tell us that we never should give up. In "The Twist", he tell us that if we dont remember things, doesn't mean that we dont have knowledge.

    Jose Carlos Cordero 10-Adonai

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  15. I think that in the poem of the Empty Dance Shoes is so positive that objects can communicate among themselves.For example in the poem the author tell and compare the empty dance shoes with a clown that could get up. And twist he said that not everything that you do not know does not mean you do not have the knowledge to never know.

    Edgardo Caparros
    10 Sabaot

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  16. I think that in the poem of the Empty Dance Shoes is so positive that objects can communicate among themselves.For example in the poem the author tell and compare the empty dance shoes with a clown that could get up. And twist he said that not everything that you do not know does not mean you do not have the knowledge to never know.

    Edgardo Caparros
    10 Sabaot

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  17. ⌘ In both poems "The empty dancing shoes" and "The twist" we see how they communicates memories. In " The empty dancing shoes" Eady compares the empty shoes with a clown that was lying on the floor because he got beat up with a sandbag. In life we ​​must stand up and move on. We should never stop looking for what we really want. In "The twist" we learn that even if you may not remember some things that doesn't mean that you have no knowledge.

    Gabriela Rivera
    10 Jireh ❤

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  18. The Twist and the Empty dance shoes are based on memories ... Eady in the Twist lets us see how memory isn't important to knowledge and in the empty dancing shoes expresses how memorys stay if you don't "move them" or remember them (like the dance shoes)They both have a positive purpose talk about memories and when we use them or and how important they are to us.

    Nicole Cruz (10 Jireh)

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  19. The twist and the empty dance shoes communicates memories. Yes because, Eady compare the shoes to a clown on the floor because he got beat up with a sandbag. In the Twist tells us that even though you don't remember something it doesn't have any knowledge of it.

    Luis Soto 10 sabaot

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  20. Both poems communicate memories. It brings a positive thought to the reader because in the poem "Empty Dance Shoes" the author compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up and could not get up. It means that in lifer we will fall down but we cannot give up, keep going in our life. In "The twist" it tells us that maybe you don't remember something of our past but it doesn't means we don't have the knowledge of it.

    Daniella Dorta 10 Adonai

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  21. "The Twist" and "The Empty Dance Shoes" communicate memories. Yes, it does serve as a positive purpose because in "The Empty Dance Shoes" ,Eady compares a clown that got beat up and then got back up, this teach us to always get back up.In "The Twist" he teach us that if we dont remember things, it doesnt mean that we dont have knowledge.

    Kimberly Vazquez Arocho<3 10-sabaot

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  22. Both of the stories communicate memories in a positive way, like when in "The Empty Dance Shoes" he compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up but in truth he is telling us to not give up and in "The Twist" he tells us that just because we have no knowledge of something, it doesn't mean that we don't know anything. -Alexandra Garcia 10Jireh

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  23. The two poems are both about memories. They bring those memories in a positive way. In "The Empty Dance Shoes" when the dancing shoes are compared with a beaten clown, it tells us to neer give up and continue along. In "The Twist" the author tells us that if you don't remember something from the past it doesn't mean that you aren't inteligent.

    Blanca Paola Atiles 10mo Adonai

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  24. The Twist is a story that we can see that the character is imagining the past when he was on his childhood. In the Empty Dance Shoes we can see how the narrator talks about the shoes as if they were alive. Both stories are telling us that we can keep memory alive.


    Gabriel Martinez 10 Jireh

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  25. Both poems teach us and show us to never give up. In The Empty Dance shoes the author compares the shoes with a clown. In the Twist he told us that it does not matter if we forget or don't remember doesn't mean we don't know about it. MY opinion is that sometimes we remember if we want or if we care things that doesn't matter in your life that don't have sense are easy to forget.


    -Fabiola Enid
    10-Adonai

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  26. The two stories have to do with memories in a good and positive way.They bring a positive messege to the reader in poem "Empty Dance Shoes" the author compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up and could not get up. It means that in lifer we will fall down but we cannot give up, keep going in our life. In "The twist" talks about if you dont remember something in your past doesnt mean your not smart its normal.

    ~Andrea Saldana
    10 sabaot

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  27. In "The Empty Dance Shoes", Eady speaks about inertia referring to the state of being idle. The shoes did not move, because they did not have someone filling them. They were in need of something. At the end of the poem it says: "He is about to act upon a different set of scientific principles. He is ready to dance." In the stanza before this last two lines it is speaking about a boy and a bully. Now, it says he is "about to act upon a different set of scientific principles", meaning he is ready to make a change and stand up to the bully, fill the shoes. The idea of needing to come through and standing up for yourself.
    In "The Poetic Interpretation of the Twist" we see that the speaker was a child when the twist was in style. He has very little memory of the dance. (lines 41-46)He recalls his family, he recalls his neighborhood, but he does not recall completely the twist, he is unable to explain the dance's meaning. The memory of the twist is ambiguous to him, but the memory of his family and his neighborhood is clear.
    Both poems covey messages. To stand up for yourself, and fill your shoes. And that even though you may not remember something clearly, it does not mean you don't have a story to tell.
    This type of communication serves a positive purpose in a way that we can learn from, we can apply these messages to our lives.

    Monica Nahir Borges Gonzalez
    10 Adonai

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  28. In both stories we see how the author delivers an idea to the reader and this idea is that both can create memories and discuss different ideas. The memories are transmitted though the story serving a positive purpose because it helps to make the story better. In the Twist the author does not remember at all and in the "Empty Dance Shoes" the author compares the shoes to a clown.


    Stephanie Colon
    10 JIREH

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  29. They both convey memories in a positive way. In "The Empty Dancing Shoes", he uses inertia to motivate us to overcome the obsticles in our lives. Our problems won't solve themselves unless we act upon them. We must keep our heads up high and face any adversity with a strong heart. In "The Twist" , Eady takes a different approach. Here, he shows us the different memories a simple thing can bring up, and even if we don't remember what we were trying to explain in the first place, it doesn't mean we have no knowledge at all. We should revel in the memories that make us happy in life and forget about the negative. 10 Sabaot Arnaldo Colón.

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  30. The "empty shoes" conveys the idea of never giving up for example, The clown on the floor that got beat up my the sand bag. Eady is telling us that no matter what, if you go down, you should alwayz go right up and keep trying and going until you get it right. The "twist" conveys memories, it tells you that even if that memory is blurry it dosent mean that you dont have knowlege or had the experience of it.
    -Melanie Cubano

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  31. Both Poems are about memories. They bring those memories in a positive way. When in Empty dances shoes it compares the shoes with a clown he is trying to tell us to never give up. In the the twist the author doesnt remember much about the twist, and tells us that just because we dont remember things, you dont have knoledge of such things.

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  32. These poem are giving us an example of memorie that the readers remember. These memories are in positive ways. In the Empty dance shoes the author does not remember too much about it but compares it to many things that needs to be remember. In the Twist tells that because the memory is not clear does not mean that it is not important.

    Omayra Velez 10 Adonai

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  33. The poems like the Twist and the Empty Dance shoes are poems about memories of the author when they were children. The Twist brings the idea that even if we do not remember a memory it does not mean that it less important. And in the Empty dance shoes he remembers it not too clear but the things he remember compares it with good things.

    Mariana Velez 10 Adonai

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  34. In both stories the authors talk about memories.In the twist" the author is triyng to tell us that if you dont remember something it doesnt mean that you dont have knowledge.in the "empty dance shoes" eady compares the reality woth a clawn that is laying on the floor and tell us that even when you are in a bad sircunstances you hace to get up and figh for wath you want.
    Jonathan velazquez
    10 adonai

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  35. In the stories "the empty dance shoes" and the "twist" the authors comunicates memories. In the "twist" the author tell us that even though you dont remember things it doesnt mean that you dont have any knowledge and in the "empty dance shoes" eady compares the shoes with a clown that is laying on the floor and couldnt get up, this teach us that we have to fight for what we cant and dont give up

    Andrah soto estela
    10 adonai

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  36. Both poems are about memories. These memories are reflected in a positive way. He uses inertia to motivate us. In the Empty Dance Shoes the author compares the shoes with the clown and in the Twist it talks about when you dont remember something that is normal.
    Roberto
    10sabaot

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  37. What is in our past life or our life, has a memory. Every time we come to see the most pleasant memories of that. Maybe for other people simplemete is a simple object, but for us it is as if we were living in the moment or experience with the to see or feel. As the ballet slippers, shoes were only a few simple but they had some important memories. Both poems are about memories.

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  38. In the poem of "The poetic interpretation of the Twist" the author, Cornelius Eady, communicates his memories by remembering his childhood. He is remembering his sister that he compares that runs like a giraffe (very fast), his father who escaped in his bicycle to do the grocery shopping by himself, and the barbershop. In this poem Eady tells us to forget the past and move on to the present and future that is what we have on front of us every day as a gift. In the other hand, in the poem "The empty dance shoes" Eady tries to give us a message in which he uses as example the empty dancing shoes. He tries to tell us that the shoes will not move until someone decides to put them on, giving us a message in which he tells that we need to put on our shoes in life in order to move on and prosper. I think that both poems are used too communicate positive messages in which the author tries to persuade us to never give up in life and always look forward to better things and a better future.

    Kimberly Roman Diaz (10th Sabaot)

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  39. Both poems communicate memories. In the poem "The Empty Shoes" , Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up, it is a positive purpose because this motivate the people to never give up when the situation is very hard.And in the "Twist" he tells us that even though you don't remember something it doesn't have any knowledge of it.

    jennifer cortes
    10sabaot!

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  40. In "The empty dance shoes" we see the meaning of inertia in every aspect of the story as we an empty shoes, which cannot move as an aspect matter. But if someone is using them or as we can say filling them. In this poem we can see as Eady is always telling use in the story about the needs and how can we fill our shows. This gives a really positive feeling to the reader as he experiences this poem.
    In the "Twist" Eady uses a really different method to gives us his always positive massage as we experience his poems. H e gave parts of his memory as he was a child. He shows us how he didn't remember much about how was the twist but he did remember about how the people danced it. In this story he teaches us about how we have to keep our memory alive.
    This both poems give us some very positive tips.

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  41. Both poems communicate all kinds of memories . In the first poem, "The empty shoes" Eady compares the clown shoes. This poem gives us a positive purpose, because they tell us that we should never give up and we keep trying to be more difficult situations. In the poem "The twist" also gives a positive meaning that we can apply to our lives as human beings, because he says that if you do not remember anything that happened at some point that does not mean you do not know things with excellent knowledge and intelligence. <3

    Jelismarie De JEsus Trujillo
    10mo Adonai (:

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  42. Both poems have a positive purpose because they talk about standing up for us and that it doesn't matter if we forget stuff, we still have knowledge and learning.
    In "Twist" Eady talks about his memories. He says that we can't expect to remember everything about our childhood but that we still have knowledge about it. This is showed when he says "And I am sorry to admit you have come to the wrong person. I recall the twist the way they recall meeting a distant aunt as a baby or the afternoons spent in home room waiting for the last bell" Also when he says "My head hurts. I am tired of remembering"
    In "The Empty Dance Shoes" Eady teals about how shoes won't move if you don't fill them. The shoes are empty and this shows that if you don't have a purpose to move forward you can't do anything, shown in lines 3-5 when it says "An empty pair of dance shoes will sit on the floor like a wart until it is given a reason to move." Also, in lines 43-44 of the poem say "98-pound weakling brushes from his cheeks as the bully tows away his girlfriend" and the last stanza says "When he spies the coupon at the back of the comic book, He is about to act upon a different set of scientific principles. He is ready to dance." in which it shows us that we have to stand up for ourselves.

    Sara Perez Torres *10 Adonai*

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  43. Both stories comunicate memories . In "The Empty Dancing Shoes" for example Eady compares the shoes with a clown who has been beat up and is in the ground and cannot stand up. This shows us tha no matter the problem , situation , circumstance etc you must get up and keep on fighting and never give up. In "Twist" , even if you dont remember something doesnt mean you dont know it or have not lived it before and that not remembering is normal to happen

    10 Jireh Gabriel Tosado

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  44. The two stories contain and compare memories. The poems have positive meanings and objectives. Their objective is to teach us good human values (Never Give Up & Don't Doubt Yourself). The way that "The Empty Dancing Shoes" expresses this value is by comparing shoes with a clown that has been brought down and who cant get up and in the "Twist" we are told that just because we sometimes forget it doesn't mean that we are stupid.

    - Axviel 10J

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  45. Both poems talk about memories. On "The Empty Dancing Shoes", Eady compares the shoes with a clown that got beat up. This teach us to never give up and stay strong.The "twist" conveys memories, it tells you that even if that memory is blurry it doesn't mean that you don't have knowlege or had the experience of it.


    Fabiola Raquel
    10 Jireh :)

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  46. Both stories communicate memories.The Empty Dancing Shoes is telling us that we all have problems in life and that the only way to solve them is to confront them. Twist tells us that we should remember the good times and forget the bad memories. - Johamile Viera Feliciano 10 Adonai

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  47. The “Empty Shoes” and "The Poetic Interpretation of the Twist," comunícate memories. In "The Empty shoes," Eady, compares the empty shoes with a clown that was lying on the floor because he got beat up with a sandbag. This poem shows us that we never should give up; that we have to keep fighting. "The Poetic Interpretation of the Twist," show us that if you don’t remember something it doesn’t means that you don’t have knowledge or understanding of it.

    Lerianis Curbelo 10-Sabaot

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  48. In "The Twist", the author is expressing that, even though he is not able to express everything that he already knows, he recognizes that the memories still are within him and he wishes to express that even though you do not know how to express, or say something, you still know, and remember. "The Empty Dance Shoes" are a different case, shoes that will not move until they are filled. Going to a deep thought, it is like a life without purpose, if you don't live it, it isn't going to take you anywhere, like the shoes, if you don't wear them, they're not going any place.

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  49. Both "The Twist" and "The Empty Dance Shoes" shows memories. In The Empty Dance Shoes, the author shows that the shoes need something or someone to make them move. It compares it to a clown that has been hit by a sandbag. He is on the floor but he can stand up and continue with his path. In The Twist, the author shows that even if you don't remember the event or the past, that doesn't mean that you don't have knowledge to understand it.

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  50. Both poems comunicates Cornelius Eady's memories. In the Twist he tries to tell us that if you dont remember something well it doesnt mean that you dont have the knowledge about it. Also he tells us to always live and enjoy the present not the past. In The empty dance shoes he tells us that when we fall or stumble, we should always get up and continue life and not stay lying on the floor like the clown who got beat up with a sandbag.

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  51. The twist and the pair of dance shoes show us the message that we should keep our memories alive. The Twist gives the example of a clown in the floor that can't get up because of all the suffering and in The Empty Shoes we see that if you don't put on your dancing shoes they will never move by themselves. This means that we are supposed to always remember those good moments and never forget

    - Paola Alejandra 10 Jireh

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  52. "The Twist" and "The Empty Shoes", both poems shows Cornelious Eady's memories. In the Empty Shoes the author tell us that if no one wear the shoes they can't move or dance at them self. They need to be wear from somebody. The author compare the shoes with a clown that get beat up. In "The Twist" Cornelios tell us that even if you may not remember some things that doesn't mean that you have no knowledge.
    Janelis Perez Antonsanti
    10mo Adonai

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  53. Both stories have a positive message about our memories. In The Twist we see that we cant remember all of our memories but we will always have knowledge of it. The dancing shoes represent that if we don't decide to move forward things will not happen alone.
    - Nestor Velasquez 10 Jireh

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  54. "The Twist" and "The Empty Shoes", both poems shows Cornelious Eady's memories. In the Empty Shoes the author tell us that if no one wear the shoes they can't move or dance at them self. They need to be wear from somebody. The author compare the shoes with a clown that get beat up. In "The Twist" Cornelios tell us that even if you may not remember some things that doesn't mean that you have no knowledge.
    Janelis Perez Antonsanti
    10mo Adonai

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  55. Both poems have a positive purpose also both of them talk about memories. In "The Twist" he is explaining that it doesn't matter if we forget stuff, we still have knowledge and learning. The poem "The Empty Dance Shoes" teaches us as though we fall we must strengthen, get up and move forward and he compares that to a clown that got beat up, he had to stand up and move foward.

    Andrea Paola Hernandez
    10 Adonai

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  56. Both poems in the twist and the empty shoes.two of them have eadys memories. in the empty shoes the author compares the shoes with a clown when he got beat up , it have a good purpose because motivate many people when the life got beat up you have to continue living. in the twist the author tells us that remember the good times and try to forget bad times.

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    1. Both the poems comunicates Cornelios memories. The Empty Dance Shoes" , the autor shows that the shoes need something or someone to make them move. The Twist is a story that we can see that the character is imagining the past whent he was on his childhood

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  57. Both the poems comunicates Cornelios momeries. The Empty Dances Shoes", the autor show that the shoes need something or someone to make them move. The Twist this a story that we can see that the characters is imaginig the past whent he was on childhood

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  58. The poem “Twist” communicate us the state of memory and flashback. We see this when the author recalls his family and his town in his childhood. At that moment of his childhood the twist was pretty famous but he doesn’t remember it as he remembers his family and town. In the poem “The empty dance shoes” communicate to us the state of inertia. The reader see the in the poem when the author describes the situation of the clown that got beat up by a sandbag. The poem “The empty dance shoes” serve as positive purpose because it show us that if we fall or get beat up by something, we can’t keep our self in the floor, we need to stand up and continue with our live and show people of what we are capable of. Also the poem “Twist “serve a positive purpose because if we don’t remember something it doesn’t mean that we aren’t intelligent or that we don’t have memory it only shows that that wasn’t pretty important to our lives. If we don’t remember something we must show people that we can do the same things that they do.
    Natalia R. Cid---10 Adonai

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  59. These two stories tell us about the past history. The twist tells us about the history of a man named Cornelius and his life. The Empty Dance Shoes tell us about the chilhood of that person in particular.

    Thays Fontanez Callazo
    10- sabaot

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  60. In both poems Cornelius comunicates his memories. In the poem "The Empty Dances Shoes" the author shows that the shoes need something or someone to make them move.An example of this is The clown hit by a sandbag and in the poem "The Twist" he tries to tell us that if you dont remember something it doesnt mean that you dont have the knowledge about it. In this story he teaches us about how we have to keep our memory alive.

    Angelica M. Canabal
    10mo Sabaot

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  61. They both talk about memories. In the Empty Dance Shoes Eady compares the dance shoes with a clown who is lying on the floor, because he got beat up with a sandbag. The Twist tell us that if we don't remember something it does'nt mean that we don't have the knowledege of that. In life we fall many times but we always have to stand and stronger that before!!<3 ;)
    att. Emily Pagan
    10 Jireh

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  62. "The Twist" and "The empty dance shoes" communicate memories. The authors show the reader different ideas; in "The Twist" the memories are showed in a positive way toward the reader. What the author is trying to tell us is that if you don't know something to the 100% you should keep trying until you find out what it is. In the empty shoes Eady compares the shoes as a clound that got beat and couldn't get up and keep fighting. This messege that the author brings us is to tell us that you should never give up in life no matter what problem or enemy you comfront.


    GUSTAVO COLON
    10 ADONAI

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  63. Both poems reach out memories. In "The Twist" he is somewhat more positive in an energetic way while in "The Empty Dance Shoes" he is completely positive, given the comparison in which he compares the shoes to the clown that once fell and kept fighting. This all definately serves as a positive purpose since it is giving hope to those that have fallen at one point in life.

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  64. The empty shoes and twist the show memories. Both have a good purpose. Example: in the empty shoes Eady compares the shoes of a clown who was beaten and could not get up. This teaches us that we have to fight for what they really want and not give up. The Twist tells us that even if we do not remember something does not mean we do not have the knowledge to do something.

    Valeria S Gonzalez, - 10 sabaot #13

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  65. In both poems, "The Twist" & "The Empty Dance Shoes", Eady talks mostly about memories. This is a positive type of communication beacuse it helps the reader visualize the idea the author is trying to convey. For example in "The Twist" Eady says that even if you don't remember something it doesn't mean you have no knowledge at all. And he uses the empty clown shoes and compares them to the dance shoes to show that if we get beat up in life we have to get back up and keep moving forward.

    -Raisa Diaz
    10 Sabaot

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  66. In the twist and in the empty dance shoes the author talks about memories. Yes it is positive because it helps us understand what the author is trying to say. In the empty dance shoes he compares the shoes to beat up clown shoes to show us that we have to keep going when life is hard. In the twist he is telling us that not remembering isnt a bad thing and it does not mean that you dont know anything.

    Hector Rios
    10 S

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  67. In both poems the authors write about memories. They're both positives because it teaches us positive things. In the first one it talks about the clown shoes and it teach us that we are gonna fall in life but we have to get up. In the other one we learn that we're not going always to remember all the moments but we will always have the knowledge.

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  68. Both stories communicate us about memories. On The Empty Dance shoes the author explains that the shoes need something or someone to move. On The Twist the author shows you that if you forget something it doent means you have no knowledge about it.

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  69. Both poems are about memories. These memories are reflected in a positive way. He uses inertia to motivate us. In the Empty Dance Shoes the author compares the shoes with the clown and in the Twist it talks about when you dont remember something that is normal.Andre julian Marrero 10th adonai

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  70. In both poems they remember different memories they used to have. This type of poems have positive purpose because is something good that we can apply in our lives. In "The Empty Dance Shoes" it compares the shoes like a clown knocked out and it means that you have to stand and carry on with your life leaving behind the problems and focusing on the future. In "The Twist" the author couldn't remember very clearly, but he does recall the neighbors and most importantly his family. He is unable to remember that memory but this doesn't mean that if you don't remember you have no knowledge.

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  71. Both compare memories. In the poem “Empty Dance Shoes" compares this shoes to a clown that got beat up by sandbag, it tell us to not give up and keep trying. In the poem "The Twist" tell us that even if you don't remember something, it dosen't mean to don't have knowledge of it.

    Jared Zayas Torres
    10 Adonai

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  72. Both of these poems have memories remembered in the passed and they compare them. In empty dance shoes, it compares shoes with a clown that got beat up, it is telling the reader never to give up. In the poem the twist it tells us that just because you dont remember something it doesent neccesarily mean you have no knowledge of this.

    Steven Nieves Colon
    10 Adonai

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  73. Both poems are metaphorical. They transmit a possitive message. They tell us about their childhood memories, even though they are little fragments it doesn't mean they are less important.

    -Amy
    10 Adonai

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